Thursday, August 4, 2011

Is this a good poem as is, or do I need to add more?

should "found" be "ground" ? this does feel rather complete to me as it is, but saying that, it also feels like a prelude to something. possibly a short story. obviously we would like the hear the backstory that this piece only introduces. sometimes in my own work I like to start a story with a poem and switch back and forth from poetry to prose. So, you got any short stories on ya?

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